far away

the only problem we have
that you are man and I am woman
both living in one cave
far from the sky and Men
fight dance laugh and die
so whever we do let them deny

the only problem we have
that both love each other
earth sky and also lake
we follow the trouble of the doer
such blame we have
we forget we are the leader


me and you are one
has soul without body
we fly over earth
we change our hobby
me and you far away
waiting for another way

oof i could breath
now when i see the truth
far away we seperate
oh we can ever say
we are far away
but wait
it could enlight
our life together
to change the mood
and the kind of the food
so stay there
so far away
i wait you
i m so happy with thee
but i still saying
you know what I am saying
............................
you know it then

Please Om Nafees

Did not understand the subject well, but if you were talking about people who live with each other in a cave
What will be their condition.? .,

And how we should walk or to evolve
Sorry!
I do not know exactly what is required

Thank you for your efforts, O creator


:ورده:

oh Omar
your reading makes the text so beauty

may be it contains some hidden meaning
since it describes a far away situation
but believe nme you are right
there is some irony there

wish you good luck

Thank you for your praise , but

Sorry.,

My language is weak

I wish you luck and happier

Thank you

a good one dearest friend
man thanks for sharing

dear Omar you seem so modest
i believe the quality of your English is rather good