should be good try

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

Hello all brothers and sisters ..

should be good try = a headline which came involuntarely

i mean with this topic ..it should be good try to have practice here

with my brothers and sisters to show how a big boy i am ..

and if i get mistakes

they will correct them carefully

.............
::sa06::

when you have a religion which teaches how to keep your dignity
you have actually to say (thanks Allah ) constantly and at every where

الحمدلله رب العالمين

this afternoon i was on my way to home after i finished Al-jum'a prayer

i saw a scene which i had never seen like it

i always when i come back from school stop in a shop

which is close to my house to buy chocolate

::sa06:: and to see the seller who treats as his son

and he had never called me with my name even though he knows it

"he just calls me "my son

he is an indian but has been here for 32 years

and has never gone back home since he

arrived in England

by the way , when i turned up i saw that scene which is i can't forget at all

you can all imagine a drunk man and drunk women was kissing each other

that was normally and i have no problems with it

then they fell down

when i became closer i heard them gruntting as the pigs ,

i thought they were dieing or some thing like that .

i stoped shocked and i was thinking about what to do .. i couldn't move

and i couldn't help

as soon as i stoped , the seller who calls me as his son drew me

and entered me into his shop

and said don't do any thing with people like that

( no help and don't look at them at all )

i said that but uncle they are dieing or might need some help

then he laughed and said no they just drank a lot of alcohol and i'll show what to

behave with them .

he phoned his son who works a police officer in the police station which around that place

after that his son came and kicked them a way ::sa05::

and gave them only 80 pounds fine :mad:

what a strange country and********people
only 80 pounds ::sa10::

then they left that place and i went home safely

that was my story and i hope you enjoy it although i know it's quite boring ::sa03::

but forgive me ::sa04::

thank you very much

Majed and sister Yara you always know
what is your jobs with my subjects::sa06::

writing in this forum helped me to correct my mistakes and
to get new experience and benefits

without pratice you won't improve anything at all

away is a word which i thought it same as a way

the only thing which calms me down when i get mistakes

that none of us has came to this life as a genius

everyone gets mistakes and can learn from his mistakes

that just to correct a way to away

and to upraise the topic::d:: again

I will come back when I find time

Greetings and appreciation

اقتباس:

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ماجد الشرقية

I will come back when I find time

Greetings and appreciation

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DOES THAT MEAN I GOT MAJOR MISTAKES BOSS

IS THAT WHY YOU NEED TIME

YOU SCARED ME ACTUALLY ::d::

I'M WAITING FOR YOU O' CHAIRMAN ::sa04::

Will be back with more correction

BTW :

I Admire your ambition

Ta

Yara

Dear Brother Hozayfa

Thanks for sharing your feelings with us,

just remember brother even looking at them can make us
sick to the stomach,

ignore .. and keep walking in your way

I'm so happy with your English writing.
Really good, but stay away from slang words

I’ve done few touches to your words

***

When you have a religion that teaches how to keep your dignity
you have actually to say (thanks To Allah) constantly and at everywhere

الحمدلله رب العالمين

In the afternoon I was on my way to home after I finished Al-juma'a prayer

I saw a Sean that I’d never saw like it

Always when I come back from school, I usually stop to a shop

Which is closed to my house to buy chocolate

And to see the seller who treats like his son

He never called me with my name, even though he knows it

"He just calls me "my son He is an Indian but has been here

for 32 years And has never went back home since he

Arrived to England

By the way, while I was facing that Sean, I also saw

a normal thing, you can all imagine a drunk man and drunk

women was kissing each other, Here is normal,

and I have no problems with it

Then they fell down When I came closer, I heard them

grunting as the pigs, I thought they were dieing or some thing likes

that. I stopped and was shocked, thinking what to do. I couldn't move

And I couldn't help As soon as I stopped, the seller pulls me

And took me to his shop He said:

Don't do any thing with people like that

(No help and don't look at them at all)

I said: but uncle they are dieing or might need some help

Then he laughed and said no. They just drank a lot of

alcohol , I’ll show how to Deal with them.

He called his son who works as a police officer at

the police station which around the place

After that his son came and kicked them a way

And gave them only 80 pounds fine What a strange country

and wired people only 80 pounds , Then they left that place

and I went home safely

Hello my brothers and sisters

Boss::sa06:: thanks a lot for removing that word wich bothered you
................

sister pen of gold ::sa06:: Yara

thank you very much
.. i'm always proud of you actullay and everyone here .

and i won't use slang again insha'Allah

i always look forward your help and your experience

you made me happy wallah ..

thank you a lot again

::sa06::

by trying you will reach
dont be care with mistakes

Hello Mr Alzhami

i'm not worried
but still in the beginning
and day after day i improve

i ask to correct my mistake might because i'm not stuck up::sa06::

i want to learn and to learn you have to ask

thanks a lot bother Hazm
and accept my opinion