Help meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

الدكتوره طلبت مننا نكون جمل عن هذي الكلمات
وانا كونت هذي اذا كان فيها غلط صححوها بلييييييييييز :(
الكلمات هي
( give up ) التخلي
1-i will give up a wear heels forever
2-I will not give up access to my goal
3-I will not give up my friend

(lucky) محظوظ

1-I'm lucky because I entered the Department of English Language
2-I'm lucky because I won in many competitions
3-I'm fil lucky today because i got my ring

(Fame) الشهرة

1-I'm trying to get to fame through his drawings
2-Of the most Programs in the world fame opera program



وعندي كلمة ماعرفت اكون عليها جمل
( determined )العزم
انا في الإنتظار::sa03::

They are determined to win the war
determining is half the way to victory
I'm determined to finish this

اذا جبتي درجة مش ولا بد ما أعرفك ومو أنا اللي أعطيتك الجمل::d::

ثانكيوووووووووووووووووووووووووووز كبيراااااااااااااات
نيسان الله يحولكم بجيران .....etc::d::::sa08::
زودت هذا I'm determined to finish this exam
عشان تنجلط لا بالمره يتقلعب:
او work
عن جد عن جد مش حنساها لك ::sa05::::يهدي::

1-i will give up a wear heels forever لم افهم معناها !!!!
2-I will not give up to reach my goals
3-I will not give up my friends
فضلت ان تضاف عليها s الجماعة والاصلية ان شاء الله صح
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1- I'm lucky because I entered the Department of English Language
الجمله تقريبا صياغتها صحيحة ولكن لم أتعود ان يقال للاقسام التعليميه department
ربما college او section أو institute طبعا الاولى كلية الثانية قسم الثالثة معهد
2-I'm lucky because I won in many competitions
ان شاء الله صحيحة (انا محظوظ لاني ربحت العديد من المسابقات)
3-I'm lucky today because I got my ring
حذفت كلمة fil والظاهر القصد بها feel ولكن الجملة بدونها ربما افضل
........................................
1- I'm trying to get to fame through his drawings
الجملة تقريبا صحيحة ولكنها واضح انها مقتبسه من قصه او من شيء سبقها او يليها , وفي العاده لا يفضل اخذ الجمل مثل ما هي ولكن افضل انشائها لان معنى الجمله (انا احاول الوصول الى الشهره من رسوماته ) ما رأيك اذا قلنا Ronaldo is fames in football او حتى
Opama is fames in all over the world
2-One of the most Programs in the world fame is opera program
..................................
1- he determined to succeed in his life هو قرر النجاح في حياته
2- my father determined to punish me tomorrow ::d::

اقتباس:

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة فرشت رمل البحر

ثانكيوووووووووووووووووووووووووووز كبيراااااااااااااات
نيسان الله يحولكم بجيران .....etc::d::::sa08::
زودت هذا I'm determined to finish this exam
عشان تنجلط لا بالمره يتقلعب:
او work
عن جد عن جد مش حنساها لك ::sa05::::يهدي::

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آمين آمين ::d::
وأصلاً ما راح تنسينها لأني بأذكرك فيها على طول ::d::
أنا تركت الجملة كذا عشان انتِ تحطين اللي يناسبك , وزي ما قلت لك اذا الدرجة ماش أنا ما عطيتك شي ولا أعرفك

1-i will give up a wear heels forever لم افهم معناها !!!!
معناها انا سوف أتخلى عن لبس الكعب الى الأبد::d::

2-I will not give up to reach my goals
3-I will not give up my friends
فضلت ان تضاف عليها s الجماعة والاصلية ان شاء الله صح
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1- I'm lucky because I entered the section of English Language
كذا صحيحة؟!::sa07::
الجمله تقريبا صياغتها صحيحة ولكن لم أتعود ان يقال للاقسام التعليميه department
ربما college او section أو institute طبعا الاولى كلية الثانية قسم الثالثة معهد
2-I'm lucky because I won in many competitions
ان شاء الله صحيحة (انا محظوظ لاني ربحت العديد من المسابقات)
3-I'm lucky today because I got my ring
حذفت كلمة fil والظاهر القصد بها feel ولكن الجملة بدونها ربما افضل
الجملة معناها انا محظوظ لأني حصلت على خاتمي المفقود
........................................
1- I'm trying to get to fame through his drawings
الجملة تقريبا صحيحة ولكنها واضح انها مقتبسه من قصه او من شيء سبقها او يليها , وفي العاده لا يفضل اخذ الجمل مثل ما هي ولكن افضل انشائها لان معنى الجمله (انا احاول الوصول الى الشهره من رسوماته ) ما رأيك اذا قلنا Ronaldo is fames in football او حتى
Opama is fames in all over the world
لا والله كل الجمل انا كتبتها ::sa03::وترجمته هذي الجملة انا احاول الوصول الى الشهرة من خلال الرسم::sa04::
2-One of the most Programs in the world fame is opera program
من البرامج الأكثر شهرة في العالم برنامج اوبرا:)
..................................
1- he determined to succeed in his life هو قرر النجاح في حياته
2- my father determined to punish me tomorrow ::d::

::sa08::::sa08::::sa08::

اقتباس:

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نيسَانْ ,!

آمين آمين ::d::

وأصلاً ما راح تنسينها لأني بأذكرك فيها على طول ::d::
أنا تركت الجملة كذا عشان انتِ تحطين اللي يناسبك , وزي ما قلت لك اذا الدرجة ماش أنا ما عطيتك شي ولا أعرفك

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الدكتوره طلبت مننا نكون جمل عن هذي الكلمات
وانا كونت هذي اذا كان فيها غلط صححوها بلييييييييييز :(
الكلمات هي
( give up ) التخلي
1-i will give up a wear heels forever
2-I will not give up access to my goal



i will give up wearing heels forever ..
i will not give up to seeking my goals
3-I will not give up my friends

(lucky) محظوظ

1-I'm lucky because I entered the Department of English Language
i am lucky because i joint the department of English language .
or :
i am lucky because i joint the subject of English Language

2-I'm lucky because I won in many competitions

3-I'm fil lucky today because i got my ring
i am lucky today because i got my ring

(Fame) الشهرة

1-I'm trying to get to fame through his drawings
آسف جداً الجملة غير واضحة أبداً وغير سليمة أيضاً قواعدياً , وضحي لي معناها حتى أستطيع تصحيحها .
أنا سأعطيك جملة على Fame :
Fame is gotten through hard work

Fame : إسم والصفة فيها Famous فكوني منتبهة للتفريق بين الصفة ولإسم .

وعندي كلمة ماعرفت اكون عليها جمل
( determined )العزم
انا في الإنتظار::sa03::

Determined = صفة والإسم منها Determination
Determined = عازم على فعل أمر ما ..
والأمثلة التي طرحتها نيسان صحيحة .

اقتباس:

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة D - PEN

الدكتوره طلبت مننا نكون جمل عن هذي الكلمات
وانا كونت هذي اذا كان فيها غلط صححوها بلييييييييييز :(
الكلمات هي
( give up ) التخلي
1-i will give up a wear heels forever
2-I will not give up access to my goal



i will give up wearing heels forever ..
i will not give up to seeking my goals
3-I will not give up my friends

(lucky) محظوظ

1-I'm lucky because I entered the Department of English Language
i am lucky because i joint the department of English language .
or :
i am lucky because i joint the subject of English Language

2-I'm lucky because I won in many competitions

3-I'm fil lucky today because i got my ring
i am lucky today because i got my ring

(Fame) الشهرة

1-I'm trying to get to fame through his drawings
آسف جداً الجملة غير واضحة أبداً وغير سليمة أيضاً قواعدياً , وضحي لي معناها حتى أستطيع تصحيحها .
معنى الجملة انا اسعى او احاول الوصول الى الشهرة من خلال الرسم:(
أنا سأعطيك جملة على Fame :
Fame is gotten through hard work

Fame : إسم والصفة فيها Famous فكوني منتبهة للتفريق بين الصفة ولإسم .

وعندي كلمة ماعرفت اكون عليها جمل
( determined )العزم
انا في الإنتظار::sa03::

Determined = صفة والإسم منها Determination
Determined = عازم على فعل أمر ما ..
والأمثلة التي طرحتها نيسان صحيحة .

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Thank you very much my Brother Hudhayfah
I will never forget your help me
I am grateful to all of you
:)

Peace be upon you
first of all i am happy since there is a clever student such fareshat in the world
for Mr Tabit the word department is correct in the second sentence
since it connotates to شعبه
. the very large institue
therefore the word is correct
for the first sentence , fareshat, there is a grammar mistake
that is located there
we often say:
I will give up wearing heels ,
since the second main verb in any
sentence should be added by the ing form
what is your mistake? you are conjugating both verb into future and
that what we have never learnt .
the same story with access
i feel with double e be careful to spelling
i am trying to be fame since the word plays
the role of a noun in the sentence
Opera program is the famous program
Opera becomes fame because of her program

the last words all what our
friends give us as an example is correct

yours

اقتباس:

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أم نفيس

Peace be upon you
first of all i am happy since there is a clever student such fareshat in the world
for Mr Tabit the word department is correct in the second sentence
since it connotates to شعبه
. the very large institue
therefore the word is correct
for the first sentence , fareshat, there is a grammar mistake
that is located there
we often say:
I will give up wearing heels ,
since the second main verb in any
sentence should be added by the ing form
what is your mistake? you are conjugating both verb into future and
that what we have never learnt .
the same story with access
i feel with double e be careful to spelling
i am trying to be fame since the word plays
the role of a noun in the sentence
Opera program is the famous program
Opera becomes fame because of her program

the last words all what our
friends give us as an example is correct

yours

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good seeing you again Om Nafees ,wish you are in the best of your health ,
and please send my salam to the great friend : Hadil Om Al hamam

i am just trying to get a little explanation , if you don't mind
at the end of the quote i noticed a suspicious sentence ,

you said first : the word " fame " plays the role of a noun "
this is most confidently Correct , and then you used in a strange way

you said : i am trying to be fame , and Opera becomes fame because of her program .
can we use it like that ?

we may say : Opera is gaining bigger fame because of her program
i reckon you meant that ..
anyhow i am just trying to get the explanation as it contradicts with what i've been taught .

thanks a lot , and please do not disappear again , and please tell my friend to come back , i miss her big time .

many thanks ..

الدكتوره طلبت مننا نكون جمل عن هذي الكلمات
وانا كونت هذي اذا كان فيها غلط صححوها بلييييييييييز :(
الكلمات هي
( give up ) التخلي
1-i will give up a wear heels forever
2-I will not give up access to my goal



i will give up wearing heels forever ..
i will not give up to seeking my goals
3-I will not give up my friends

(lucky) محظوظ

1-I'm lucky because I entered the Department of English Language
i am lucky because i joint the department of English language .
or :
i am lucky because i joint the subject of English Language

2-I'm lucky because I won in many competitions

3-I'm fil lucky today because i got my ring
i am lucky today because i got my ring

(Fame) الشهرة

1-I'm trying to get to fame through his drawings
آسف جداً الجملة غير واضحة أبداً وغير سليمة أيضاً قواعدياً , وضحي لي معناها حتى أستطيع تصحيحها .
معنى الجملة انا اسعى او احاول الوصول الى الشهرة من خلال الرسم:(
أنا سأعطيك جملة على Fame :
Fame is gotten through hard work

Fame : إسم والصفة فيها Famous فكوني منتبهة للتفريق بين الصفة ولإسم .

وعندي كلمة ماعرفت اكون عليها جمل
( determined )العزم
انا في الإنتظار::sa03::

Determined = صفة والإسم منها Determination
Determined = عازم على فعل أمر ما ..
والأمثلة التي طرحتها نيسان صحيحة .
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Thank you very much my Brother Hudhayfah
I will never forget your help me
I am grateful to all of you


Thanks alot brothers &sisters for your nice contributions . Everyones seems to have his &her openion,and here is mine :
I think it better to say : I am lucky that I joined the department of English. We can omit the word " language "
Concerning the second sentence ,I think it is better to say " I feel lucky that I got my ring.
(fame )
I am trying to get to fame through his drawings.
It is better to say : I am trying to gain a lot of fame through my drawings.
(if you are thinking of your own drawings)
Obama is fames in all over the world
It is better to say : Obama is famous all over the world.If you are trying to use the word " fame " , you could say " Obama's fame reached the globe.
Finally, the last sentence about Obrah should be like this :
Obrah's program gained ahigh fame all over the world.
Just my contribution, I hope that I am right.
my best regards

Thank you my brothers and sisters
تشتت رأي مين آخذ ؟مين الصح الحين؟:(

let me say something
thanks dr pen for given your point about those sentences
I am glad to see you around here

for the word fame i use it as a noun
let's take the syntactic form and see
the sentence was like that

I am trying to be fame
i= noun phrase
am trying to be fame= is a verb phrase
am= auxilary verb
trying= main verb in the ing form
to be fame = second verb phrase
to be = verb in the infinitive
fame = noun phrase

for the second sentence I said :
opera becomes fame because of her program
opera= is a noun phrase
becomes fame because of her program= verb phrase
fames because of her program= noun phrase
because of her program= adv phrase
of her program= preposition phrase
her program= noun phrase

so there are syntactically correct
thanx dr pen for your comment
and see you again

hello sister Um Nafees,
Thanx alot for your nice explanations that have aroused my memory about my academic years . Any way, I really appreciate your contributions, but I`ve got some comments about the previous sentences if you don`t mind. In the first sentence"I am trying to be fame" I think we are not able to use the word " fame " but we can use the adjective form " famous " " I am trying to be famous, but if we want to use the word " fame " we can say " I am trying to gain a high fame ....This is in one hand. On the other hand , we are not able to say " Opera becomes fame ............ In stead , we can say " Opera becomes famous because of her program. Or we can say " Opera gained a high fame because of her program. I think no one is perfect except God ., and I hope I`m right

1- I will give up wearing heels
2-I will not give up to reach my goals
3-I will not give up my friends
.................................................. ......
1-I'm lucky because I entered the Department of English Language
2-I'm lucky because I won in many competitions
3-I'm lucky today because I got my ring
.................................................. ..............
1-Ronaldo is famous in football
2-Obama is famous in all over the world
3-One of the most fame Programs in the world is opera program
................................................
1-He determined to succeed in his life
2-My father determined to punish me tomorrow
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

اخر كلام , ولكن يا فرشت تجدين هنا البعض عندهم اخطاء فليس كل من له في الاجليزية فهو يجيدها
البعض درسها وطبقها ويتعامل بها باستمرار
البعض درسها ونسيها
البعض درسها ويدرسها
البعض درسها ويعيشها في حياته بشكل عام
وهذه العينات كلها وجدت هنا
فتجدين قوة اللغة متفاوته
وان شاء الله الاجابه الاخيرة تكون أقرب لاني أخترت ما فضلته من اجابات الاخوان هنا
ولكن لا تنسي انا اتعامل بها فقط ولم ادرسها (جامعيا طبعا بتخصص وان كانت غالبية المواد بها ) فهنا من هم أفضل مني

Thank Thank Thank you my brothers and sisters

الله يوفقكم كلكم :)

Hello brother Bin Thabit ,
Thanks alot for your explanations and you really did well . I think there is a mistake in this sentence which says " One of the most fame programs in the world is opera program. In this sentence ,however, you are describing the program . So , the sentence needs an adjective instead of a noun. It should be like this " One of the most famous programs in the world is Oprah Program . Just compare the two sentences you will see the difference ..

With my best regards to you all . "

you have good point echo and you are right
but what can i say if both words play the role of word
for instance

the fame of opera is one of shining memories on TV