أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

[ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ]

I got it ,but realy , there is no body here to discuss with so I asked you not to do it.
Thanks alot

What I'm saying -at the end- is not to stop iting
and it's a good idea to share your teachers your iting
day by day , you 'll become the most famous novelist in Malaysia

i stopped iting a long time ago

because it depends on my mood as well as my imagination

but both of them are missing now

thanks for your comments

[Fifi Maria]

Here we are again


it's a really good story but the end made me surprisde because i didn't expect it to be like that


thx a lot


مع تقديري لقدراتك الجميلة في النسج و التشويق ...

[Anfas]

Yes, Maria
that's right
It seemed to be cut at the end
I was thinking of the man's friend
how about him
I realy felt as if i'm watching an ِAmerican story in T.V not itten by Yahya
^_^
I agree with you Maria
It' realy good

[الزعيم علي]

this is a very nice story , I like it
I realy felt myself there
it's kind of a little scary story
so now, do you think there were jinns or devils insides that scary house
I think the old man with the white hair is the devil himself.. I'm I ight ?

his frind should not listen to him and not getting exciting about that mad and crasy idea.... I hope he is fine

thanx bro , that was an amazing story... keep going

[ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ]

Here we are again


it's a really good story but the end made me surprisde because i didn't expect it to be like that


thx a lot


مع تقديري لقدراتك الجميلة في النسج و التشويق ...

I let the story to end itself because i was seeing the same scene in front of me
" i meant in my imagination

I really appreciate your comment

hope you all the best

thanks a lot

[ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ]

Yes, Maria
that's right
It seemed to be cut at the end
I was thinking of the man's friend
how about him
I realy felt as if i'm watching an ِAmerican story in T.V not itten by Yahya
^_^
I agree with you Maria
It' realy good

This is what i am looking for ..!

even me i am still thinking about his friend but i can't think farther

i like your frankness

my regards and hope u all the best as well

[ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ]

this is a very nice story , I like it
I realy felt myself there
it's kind of a little scary story
so now, do you think there were jinns or devils insides that scary house
I think the old man with the white hair is the devil himself.. I'm I ight ?

his frind should not listen to him and not getting exciting about that mad and crasy idea.... I hope he is fine

thanx bro , that was an amazing story... keep going

I am still confused about the old man
one day, i will go there to figure out his secret ..! who knows !
you made elated my dear friend

i hope u all the best and thanks a lot

[love_love]

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[love_love]

موضوع مميز جدا جدا حبيبى مشكور

[love_love]

موضوع مميز جدا جدا حبيبى مشكور