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Dear okam


Thanks for your advice

But I think she meant

More than a confusion

Like a maze took her balance away

Which left her in concussion

I agree it’s a strong word

But I went with the word she

Picked as to describe her feeling

Just a correction of a statement

Kind Regards

Moon Lights
Dear moonlights

i will give the definition of concussion and confusion then u can see which one is the right

concussion is an injury to the brain that was caused by a blow to the head

confusion is the state of not being able to think clearly or to know what to do

if you want to be a teacher and correct to other which one you will choose?




Everything is okay in the end
If it's not okay, then it's not the end

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