Thanks for sharing your feelings with us,
just remember brother even looking at them can make us
sick to the stomach,
ignore .. and keep walking in your way
I'm so happy with your English 
iting.
Really good, but stay away from slang words
I’ve done few touches to your words
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When you have a religion that teaches how to keep your dignity
you have actually to say (thanks To Allah) constantly and at everywhere
In the afternoon I was on my way to home after I finished Al-juma'a prayer
I saw a Sean that I’d never saw like it
Always when I come back from school, I usually stop to a shop
Which is closed to my house to buy chocolate
And to see the seller who treats like his son
He never called me with my name, even though he knows it
"He just calls me "my son He is an Indian but has been here
for 32 years And has never went back home since he
By the way, while I was facing that Sean, I also saw
a normal thing, you can all imagine a drunk man and drunk
women was kissing each other, Here is normal,
and I have no problems with it
Then they fell down When I came closer, I heard them
grunting as the pigs, I thought they were dieing or some thing likes
that. I stopped and was shocked, thinking what to do. I couldn't move
And I couldn't help As soon as I stopped, the seller pulls me
And took me to his shop He said:
Don't do any thing with people like that
(No help and don't look at them at all)
I said: but uncle they are dieing or might need some help
Then he laughed and said no. They just drank a lot of
alcohol , I’ll show how to Deal with them.
He called his son who works as a police officer at
the police station which around the place
After that his son came and kicked them a way
And gave them only 80 pounds fine What a strange country
and wired people only 80 pounds , Then they left that place
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