أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas

I got it ,but realy , there is no body here to discuss with so I asked you not to do it.
Thanks alot

What I'm saying -at the end- is not to stop writing
and it's a good idea to share your teachers your writing
day by day , you 'll become the most famous novelist in Malaysia
:thumb:

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i stopped writing a long time ago

because it depends on my mood as well as my imagination

but both of them are missing now

thanks for your comments wr

Here we are again


it's a really good story but the end made me surprisde because i didn't expect it to be like that


thx a lot


مع تقديري لقدراتك الجميلة في النسج و التشويق ...

Yes, Maria
that's right
It seemed to be cut at the end
I was thinking of the man's friend
how about him
I realy felt as if i'm watching an ِAmerican story in T.V not written by Yahya
^_^
I agree with you Maria
It' realy good

this is a very nice story , I like it
I realy felt myself there
it's kind of a little scary story
so now, do you think there were jinns or devils insides that scary house
I think the old man with the white hair is the devil himself.. I'm I wright ?

his frind should not listen to him and not getting exciting about that mad and crasy idea.... I hope he is fine

thanx bro , that was an amazing story... keep going

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Fifi Maria

Here we are again


it's a really good story but the end made me surprisde because i didn't expect it to be like that


thx a lot


مع تقديري لقدراتك الجميلة في النسج و التشويق ...

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I let the story to end itself because i was seeing the same scene in front of me
" i meant in my imagination

I really appreciate your comment

hope you all the best

thanks a lot

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas

Yes, Maria
that's right
It seemed to be cut at the end
I was thinking of the man's friend
how about him
I realy felt as if i'm watching an ِAmerican story in T.V not written by Yahya
^_^
I agree with you Maria
It' realy good

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This is what i am looking for ..!

even me i am still thinking about his friend but i can't think farther

i like your frankness

my regards and hope u all the best as well

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الزعيم علي

this is a very nice story , I like it
I realy felt myself there
it's kind of a little scary story
so now, do you think there were jinns or devils insides that scary house
I think the old man with the white hair is the devil himself.. I'm I wright ?

his frind should not listen to him and not getting exciting about that mad and crasy idea.... I hope he is fine

thanx bro , that was an amazing story... keep going

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I am still confused about the old man
one day, i will go there to figure out his secret ..! who knows !
you made elated my dear friend

i hope u all the best and thanks a lot wr

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