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    أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house


    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي







    He was wondering, what was behind this old door ?
    Everyday the same question was questioned but there was no response.
    After a long time, he found a clue which made the mysterious door possible to be solved.


    Any way , this man had to find a partner to assist him to reveal the secret of the ugly house.
    Although this person was having an evidence but the house was not safe to enter it without weapons.


    The man came up with an intelligent idea but at the same time he saw one of his old friend was passing by . this guy was studying with him at the previous school . At that moment he jumped up with happiness because he was released that his friend will be a good companion in this adventurous trip.


    He called his friend and asked him to sit down beside him on the edge of the street .
    At first time his friend could not recognize him but he immediately introduced himself to his friend . His friend's eyes were open widely with a strange look .
    you have changed extremely my friend . his friend told him .
    but you are the same as you were before . he replied .
    Time passed by and they became more comfortable with their conversations about the previous amazing days .


    He told his friend about his determination to discover and solve the ugly house through its mysterious door but his friend was shocked with fear and hesitated to join him .
    He attempted to convince his friend by telling that life without adventure is نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيoth nothing and he should try to experience life through its dangerous places to be a famous person among his community . As a result ,his friend became massively exciting and agreed to participate in this fatal way which may cost him his life .
    Bravely ,They stood up and promised each other to enter the ugly house at midnight .



    The two friend returned proudly to their homes .When our hero entered his home , his slave was waiting for him with an official envelope. While he was taking the envelope from his maid , he said " i Do not think i will attend my office again " !


    The young lady was confused and shocked at the same time because she did not hear him saying such words like this time "
    you are a professional lawyer " she told him but he did not reply "
    He left her and entered his room.

    At midnight precisely, he came out of his house and met his friend at the same place that they promised to meet there .
    They reached the ugly house and decided to jumped over the wall “
    but, he said to his friend wait a minute because i forgot to tell you about the clue "
    what do you mean ? his friend asked.
    I meant that i have a device which can open the mysterious door easily . As he was trying to open the door , he observed that his friend’s face was pale and his hands were shaking very fast .

    He opened the door and they got into the house .
    There was an old garden surrounding the ugly house and they tried to walk carefully. They passed the garden and found the main door of the house was broken . They
    could enter the house through it easily .

    When they were standing in the middle of the house at the living room , suddenly, a sad music started playing and its sound was growing louder and louder.At the same time , the song was changed to be like an evil sound . The house started shaking and moving strongly and one of columns of the house fell down on the ground .Unfortunately, his friend also fell down with a strange scream and deceased at once .

    He could not stand this accident and fell down to hang his friend tightly because he felt it was his fault when he brought his friend with him.
    The house was shaking rapidly and he noticed that there was dust started falling down .He released that the house will destroy and there is no hope to get out of the house .


    When the situation became more and more horrible , he was going to be mad and fell down unconscious. When he woke up in the morning , he saw his friend's mouth and nose were still bleeding. As result of that , he wasn’t able to move his legs or his hands !!


    . He tried to creep until he got out of the house and started to run to the nearest police station to report the accident in details and brought the police to discover what happen to his friend .However ,he was running as fast as he could until he arrived at the main gate of the police station . After he reported that his friend was murdered by someone inside the mysterious house , they hurried up with him to the area to control the situation as soon as possible .


    When the police entered the ugly house with him they were surprised because there were no damages or bloods on the ground and there was no body was lying on the ground as he had reported . Any way , the house was an usual old house.He tried to explain but his words could not come out of his mouth. They released that the professional lawyer was mad !!! They told him " Sir. you should see the doctor and left him alone .



    He did not know what shall he do !" He started to wander around the ugly house through its garden. He was pondering about his friend and the last night. He thought all things that happened last night just like a dream !!
    While he was attempting to convince himself, he saw an old man with a white hear was sitting on a big stone ! He could not move or talk and the old man was looking at him in a strange way with an evil smile!
    He became an insane man because his mind could stand with what he saw. ! He turned back and left the mysterious and started to walk around his city !



    people were surprised when they saw him walking madly and his appearance had changed completely like an old man. !”
    He continued walking for many days without talking to the others or even responding theirs questions .


    After one week , he could not move any longer and he sat down under a big tree and slept peacefully . The sky started to rain heavily and a massive thunder hut the tree as well as the man .



    Finally , his life was ended without telling others the secret of the mysterious house !
    Without knowing where is his friend or who was his friend .
    Without knowing the old man with a white hair !
    Even me, i am confused with this story !
    Should i try to go there to discover the mysterious house !




    Do you think i will come back safely or insanely !
    Do you think that the spirits had taken his friend and his brain with them !
    I can not imagine or contemplate any more !!!!!!
    IF i continue thinking about this story ,i will be mad and i will go there at once!
    My regards


    “ Yahya Faqihi “

    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    ما شاء الله
    بالتووفيق

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    الصورة الرمزية ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة خوخهـ مشاهدة المشاركة
    ما شاء الله
    بالتووفيق

    thanks a lot

    you are welcome
    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    الصورة الرمزية ريحااانة

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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    ...Very good

    {M.r Yahya, {Best wishes
    ماشي توقيع لين يرجعون الحبايب
    لـ هنا


    😍😍😍

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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ريحااانه مشاهدة المشاركة
    ...Very good

    {M.r Yahya, {Best wishes


    i can't believe my eyes ..!

    you have the ability but you attempt to avoid been well known among others

    thanks a lot..
    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    الصورة الرمزية Fifi Maria

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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    امممم لي عودة لقراءة هادئة في رحاب منزلك ذاك


    i'm not very good in inglish but i'll be back to read


    تحيتي لذاك الجمال الراقي
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيمركز

    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
    تحميل الصور

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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Fifi Maria مشاهدة المشاركة
    امممم لي عودة لقراءة هادئة في رحاب منزلك ذاك


    i'm not very good in inglish but i'll be back to read


    تحيتي لذاك الجمال الراقي


    you have to do your promise , so come back again as soon as you have time and a good mood ..

    my regards ..

    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    الصورة الرمزية Anfas
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    Aha..here we are
    A STORY
    but you know something
    I wished you put it as parts
    I mean {the story} just to read with more contemplate
    so we can
    give it deep literary criticism in terms of
    the idea , the aim , the drama .. and so on

    I like stories of any language
    so be sure that you'll see me fixed here from time to another

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    الصورة الرمزية ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas مشاهدة المشاركة
    Aha..here we are
    A STORY
    but you know something
    I wished you put it as parts
    I mean {the story} just to read with more contemplate
    so we can
    give it deep literary criticism in terms of
    the idea , the aim , the drama .. and so on

    I like stories of any language
    so be sure that you'll see me fixed here from time to another


    It will be so pleased to see you here ..

    we will improve our weakness and gain many advantages as long as we continue assisting each other

    Let us start form now onward as you mentioned above ..

    my regards


    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الشاب الخلوق مشاهدة المشاركة

    Let us start form now onward as you mentioned above ..
    That's it
    I'm a slow reader of any kind of stories even it's in Arabic
    just give me chance to finish it, then I 'll leave my brief opinion about it

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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas مشاهدة المشاركة
    That's it
    I'm a slow reader of any kind of stories even it's in Arabic
    just give me chance to finish it, then I 'll leave my brief opinion about it

    I can't deny that we can't push ourselves to read when we feel uncomfortable ..

    anyway, when you feel okay , do not forget to come

    I will be waiting for your coming

    even if it will take a long time

    all the best


    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    I've finished these lines only
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي

    He was wondering, what was behind this old door ?
    Everyday the same question was questioned but there was no response.
    After a long time, he found a clue which made the mysterious door possible to be solved.


    Any way , this man had to find a partner to assist him to reveal the secret of the ugly house.
    Although this person was having an evidence but the house was not safe to enter it without weapons.

    First of all, let me give this story a very good mark


    For its simple language that نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيitten in

    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
    So that, no complex sentences , no complex words
    and very simple Idea ,too.
    Some thing I wished here


    I hoped you made an enough description for any thing around
    as an introduction for the story, something that makes the reader preparing himself and equiping his mind to be ready for the next events.


    It would be better for some words here to be replaced with some others


    like:

    the word answer: I think it's better than response that often includes an
    action
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي

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    الصورة الرمزية ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas مشاهدة المشاركة
    I've finished these lines only
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي



    First of all, let me give this story a very good mark


    For its simple language that نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيitten in

    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
    So that, no complex sentences , no complex words
    and very simple Idea ,too.
    Some thing I wished here


    I hoped you made an enough description for any thing around
    as an introduction for the story, something that makes the reader preparing himself and equiping his mind to be ready for the next events.


    It would be better for some words here to be replaced with some others


    like:

    the word answer: I think it's better than response that often includes an
    action
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي


    you are as good as I thought ..

    let us discuss what you have observed ..


    anyway, I hope you see again the texts نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي

    you have to know the differences between a simple sentence and a complex one ..

    this is a complex sentence "
    After a long time, he found a clue which made the mysterious door possible to be solved

    because of containing after and comma ..

    a simple sentence like " he likes to eat alone "

    please refer to this website to take a look ..

    http://eslbee.com/sentences.htm

    for the word " answer " it is a very common word so , i replaced by response ..

    what you have advised me , i will take it as a good advice

    i really appreciate your comments and like them as well ..
    please be always here

    waiting for the rest of your notes


    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الشاب الخلوق مشاهدة المشاركة
    this is a complex sentence " After a long time, he found a clue which made the mysterious door possible to be solved
    The "COMPLEXITY" here has two meanings::
    The first through the structure of the sentence and this what you and Link are talking about
    the other and what I ment here is the function or the simple meanig of the sentence
    itself for those who exactly know the structure



    Many thanks for the Link
    I realy need it.

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    الصورة الرمزية ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas مشاهدة المشاركة
    The "COMPLEXITY" here has two meanings::
    The first through the structure of the sentence and this what you and Link are talking about
    the other and what I ment here is the function or the simple meanig of the sentence
    itself for those who exactly know the structure



    Many thanks for the Link
    I realy need it.
    I took it as simple as possible

    any way , continue your observation about this story ..

    Don't think i dislike what you have said "!

    I really like your coming

    my regards
    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    الصورة الرمزية Anfas
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    Here we are
    again

    The man came up with an intelligent idea and unexpectedly (1) he saw one of his old friends was passing by . this guy was studying with him at the previous school . At that moment he jumped up with happiness because he was released that his friend will be a good companion in this adventurous trip.


    He called his friend and asked him to sit down beside him in the corner(2) of the street .
    At first time his friend could not recognize him but he immediately remind (3)him withhimself to his friend . His friend's eyes were opened widely with a strange look .
    you have changed extremely my friend . his friend told him .
    but (4)you are the same as you were before . he replied .
    Time passed by and they became more comfortable with their conversations about the previous amazing days .

    The man (5) told his friend about his determination to discover and solve the ugly house through its mysterious door but his friend was shocked with fear and hesitated to join him .
    He attempted to convince his friend by telling that life without adventure is نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيoth nothing and he should try to experience life through its dangerous places to be a famous person among his community . As a result ,his friend became massively exciting and agreed Fearfullyto participate in this fatal way which may cost him his life .
    Bravely ,They stood up and promised each other to enter the ugly house at midnight .
    (1)
    i think he didn't expect his friend then
    (2)
    The street is some thing flat and ,too long to imagine exatly its edge
    (3)
    He knew him before ,so there is no need to introduce homself again to his freind ,just reninds whith himself
    (4)
    The word BUT here Confuses the reader cause it joins pronouns only ,so I don't know who is speaking here.
    (5)
    this will give me a chance to be ready for a new coming event
    This color means that there is no importance for this words and we can avoid

    I read it more than twice or thrice, so don't worry about the story itself

    It is a very wonderful and I like it

    I'm just here with these points not for Yahya but for Anfas herself
    I realy want to discuss these points with you to get benefit ecpecially from those who are out of Saudi Arabia and close to the native language

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    الصورة الرمزية ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ
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    11 2008
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas مشاهدة المشاركة
    Here we are
    again


    (1)
    i think he didn't expect his friend then
    (2)
    The street is some thing flat and ,too long to imagine exatly its edge
    (3)
    He knew him before ,so there is no need to introduce homself again to his freind ,just reninds whith himself
    (4)
    The word BUT here Confuses the reader cause it joins pronouns only ,so I don't know who is speaking here.
    (5)
    this will give me a chance to be ready for a new coming event
    This color means that there is no importance for this words and we can avoid

    I read it more than twice or thrice, so don't worry about the story itself

    It is a very wonderful and I like it

    I'm just here with these points not for Yahya but for Anfas herself
    I realy want to discuss these points with you to get benefit ecpecially from those who are out of Saudi Arabia and close to the native language
    i really appreciate your comment and i read what you نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيote .. but there is misunderstanding ..

    by the way , two of my teacher had corrected the whole story

    i will put the copy of the correcting paper here to discuss it deeply ..


    i am not angry or unsatisfied but i don't want to go father without any points




    regards نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    الصورة الرمزية Anfas
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    02 2011
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الشاب الخلوق مشاهدة المشاركة

    i will put the copy of the correcting paper here to discuss it deeply ..

    No, don't do it please
    I believe it
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
    I was afraid not to come
    I felt embarrassed about it
    May I've distorted the beauty of the text
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
    It's realy a wonderful piece of Imagination


    We 'er still waiting for more and more
    of your نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيiting

    Thank you so much

    Anfas

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    الصورة الرمزية ٻـآﮱـع آلبُّخْـﯡڕ
    تاريخ التسجيل
    11 2008
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    nowhere
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas مشاهدة المشاركة
    I was afraid not to come
    I felt embarrassed about it
    May I've distorted the beauty of the text
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
    It's realy a wonderful piece of Imagination


    We 'er still waiting for more and more
    of your نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيiting

    Thank you so much

    Anfas

    you did not got it

    i meant we will see the mistakes and we will benefit ourselves a lot from them..

    i am elated to see your participation and hope u all the best

    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
    العيد باب سعادة أكبر من نافذة الحزن التي بجانبه .."
    فيه تكبيرٌ وحمد .."
    وشكرٌ وود .."
    تغيب فيه كل الخلافات .."
    وتتجدد فيه كل العلاقات .."


    http://ask.fm/YahyaFagihi

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    الصورة الرمزية Anfas
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    02 2011
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    رد: أول تجربة لي لكتابة قصه باللغه الإنجليزية " The mysterious house

    اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الشاب الخلوق مشاهدة المشاركة
    you did not got it
    I got it ,but realy
    there is no body here to discuss with so I asked you not to do it.
    Thanks alot

    What I'm saying -at the end- is not to stop نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيiting
    and it's a good idea to share your teachers your نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيiting
    day by day , you 'll become the most famous novelist in Malaysia
    and we will be a proud of Mr. Faqihy
    نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي

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