اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas مشاهدة المشاركة
I've finished these lines only
نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي



First of all, let me give this story a very good mark


For its simple language that نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيitten in

نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي
So that, no complex sentences , no complex words
and very simple Idea ,too.
Some thing I wished here


I hoped you made an enough description for any thing around
as an introduction for the story, something that makes the reader preparing himself and equiping his mind to be ready for the next events.


It would be better for some words here to be replaced with some others


like:

the word answer: I think it's better than response that often includes an
action
نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي


you are as good as I thought ..

let us discuss what you have observed ..


anyway, I hope you see again the texts نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي

you have to know the differences between a simple sentence and a complex one ..

this is a complex sentence " After a long time, he found a clue which made the mysterious door possible to be solved

because of containing after and comma ..

a simple sentence like " he likes to eat alone "

please refer to this website to take a look ..

http://eslbee.com/sentences.htm

for the word " answer " it is a very common word so , i replaced by response ..

what you have advised me , i will take it as a good advice

i really appreciate your comments and like them as well ..
please be always here

waiting for the rest of your notes