اقتباس المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Anfas مشاهدة المشاركة
Here we are
again


(1)
i think he didn't expect his friend then
(2)
The street is some thing flat and ,too long to imagine exatly its edge
(3)
He knew him before ,so there is no need to introduce homself again to his freind ,just reninds whith himself
(4)
The word BUT here Confuses the reader cause it joins pronouns only ,so I don't know who is speaking here.
(5)
this will give me a chance to be ready for a new coming event
This color means that there is no importance for this words and we can avoid

I read it more than twice or thrice, so don't worry about the story itself

It is a very wonderful and I like it

I'm just here with these points not for Yahya but for Anfas herself
I realy want to discuss these points with you to get benefit ecpecially from those who are out of Saudi Arabia and close to the native language
i really appreciate your comment and i read what you نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعيote .. but there is misunderstanding ..

by the way , two of my teacher had corrected the whole story

i will put the copy of the correcting paper here to discuss it deeply ..


i am not angry or unsatisfied but i don't want to go father without any points




regards نقره لتكبير أو تصغير الصورة ونقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة بحجمها الطبيعي